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Sad_Indy_Gal September 25, 2006 12:21 PM

ah yes, that is much worse!!^^ in Kent, it happens to rain every single time we do P.E unless we're doing gym. Seeing as we're an all girls school, it's really annoying doing P.E! Yeah, but enough about me, dammit, i always make a conversation about myself... ooh, i'm just drawing this really funny Rose picy, but i dunno how to put it on, i might have to put it on another website and then put that url link on here, but it is funny! ^^ there are loads of dr who picys i draw! www.rickywilson.deviantart.com T__T''

Sad_Indy_Gal September 25, 2006 12:30 PM

Dammit, i thought i'd wrote something then... well anyway, i'll try and remember what i said...

Ah yes, i said that i was drawing a picture, i did didn't i!? Hehe yeah, i'm drawing a Rose picture depicting a very funny incident in our English class where we had to associate people with animals! And also i said about how do i put the pictures up, but i'll put them on my deviant art account... which you could look at 'cause i've got other doctor who work on there! YAY www.rickywilson.deviantart.com

Chris Britton September 25, 2006 12:38 PM

When you get to A-level, you don;t get to do all those subjects you hate, you do what you want, although in GCSE it feels more stressful. I look forward to seeing that picture your doing, do you have msn?

Sad_Indy_Gal September 25, 2006 12:41 PM

yeah, i do have msn! It's ace, i'm on it right now... but i'm totally bored cause all my mates have left me and have better things to do with their lives! Yeah right!

Chris Britton September 25, 2006 12:41 PM

Im going on there, hand me your addy and we can chat :)

Sad_Indy_Gal September 25, 2006 12:44 PM

ok, tis emo_zombie@hotmail.co.uk ^^ yay

Chris Britton September 25, 2006 12:46 PM

Thank you :)

Ben Dawson September 25, 2006 2:31 PM

So far......SOOOOOOO GOOD

Recurring Villain September 26, 2006 12:02 AM

Emo zombie :D

Keep writing!

Sad_Indy_Gal September 26, 2006 10:11 AM

ah, as i thought, yes, i haven't sent it home! ^^ sorry, i WILL be proccupied tomorrow cause this time my mate really IS running for year head... dammit, we didn't even have assembly today! ¬¬ I will try and send it home, unless u want a great big gap, where you've totally NO idea what's going on! ^^

Btw, i will be back online soon, my mum says i spend too much time online, so i'll be back very shortly (i.e 5 o'clock!)

Sad_Indy_Gal September 27, 2006 10:15 AM

Day 3: (Time unknown: The Forbidden Dungeon)

The Unholy Silence-
She woke up, opening one eye and looking around. The place was completely deserted, apart from a few, small, scurrying animals, running into places to hide. Cob webs stuck to the ceiling as she stood up, looking around but seeing nothing else. No one must have been here for ages, nothing was misplaced or broken. She thrust her fist out into a nearby rock, angry and hurt. The rock toppled to the floor as Grace peered confused at it. She knelt down on all fours and stared at the cracked base, grinning and laughing. Someone had replaced it back on its teetering base, giving illusion that no one had been here for years. Getting back up and smiling to herself again, she followed the broken path.

Sophie was thrown inside the cell, where Claire and Lucy were already sitting on the cold floor trying to make a plan. She hit the metal floor with a resounding bang as she brushed her hair away from her face and grinned slightly.
“Where have you been?” asked Claire finally.
“Erm, no where…” Sophie said eyeing Claire suspiciously. “Are you ok?” Claire didn’t answer.
“Where’s J?” Claire asked.
“I saw something; I don’t know what it was. It was probably something that I didn’t see actually… but, she’s gone Claire. I don’t know what happened. One minute she was there, the next she had disappeared, but I bet it’s something to do with the back wall in the cell.”

Grace trundled along the empty passage. She had no idea where she was going, but she knew she had a goal, to find out what was going on, and to stop it. She reached yet another dead end. It seemed as if it was an underground maze established in order to confused the traveler and force them to give up all hope. Grace didn’t want to give up, she knew she had to continue for everyone’s sake. She slammed her fist into the nearby wall in a rage, only to find that it went straight through. She stared at the strange sight in bemusement, not realizing until a few seconds later what it was. It was a false wall used to give the illusion of a real one. Plucking up all the courage she could, and not knowing what was on the other side, she stepped straight through.

Now seriously, and i'm not being mean or nothing... i haven't written much else. Like...9 lines... cause i can't think of what else to write... if anyone has ANY ideas, please, PLEASE tell me... and i wanna write another dr who story, but i can't think of a good beginning... so if anyone can think of THAT, that would be G.R.E.A.T! ;)

Chris Britton September 27, 2006 11:29 AM

I like it, i like it a lot, you really can make us picture this in our heads :)

Danny Stewart September 27, 2006 6:24 PM

Yes, well done. :D

Recurring Villain September 28, 2006 5:01 AM

In my day, we used common sense to solve our problems... Kids these days just punch!

Rather successfully, and technically it still is "my day".

Back in my day we had cars that were stuck on the ground and people actually died...

Sad_Indy_Gal September 28, 2006 10:21 AM

lol, i like to punch things... i'm always threatening to do that! I haven't written anymore.... sorry guys, but i am starting a new DR WHO STORY! *yay* yeah, not much enthusiasm people! :D only kidding... i might put it up soon, tsk tsk, so many stories! ^^

Danny Stewart September 28, 2006 10:28 AM

I await it eagerly. ;)

Sad_Indy_Gal September 28, 2006 10:42 AM

lol, awww that's sweet! ^^

Chris Britton September 28, 2006 12:49 PM

I await it with great anticipation, im so exicted :) you are a good story teller

Ben Dawson September 29, 2006 2:41 AM

I agree...I don't think anyone here would have a problem with another Doctor Who book, I look forward to seeing it (or....err....reading it).

Sad_Indy_Gal September 29, 2006 10:18 AM

lol aww, ok, i'm going away for the weekend to the exhibition in Cardiff, so i'll write a LOT more when i get back on sunday! (Doctor who and this one) ALLONSEE! as the doctor says... or however u spell it... TO THE DR WHO EXHIBITION!


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