Short Stories by James
 

Good well done!

Not sure about the 3rd Doctor but I doubt that the 10th Doctor would let him stay.

Still very nice!

Thanks. To clarify, the planet's called Insifi 2, not Isifi 2 as I spelt it in on sentence. Typos=confusing and irritating.

Next Story: The 4 Doctors- Prologue

I like multi-Doctor specials.<3

What universe are you from?

Megan's away for a few days with no internet, so I read this to her over the phone. We were crying from laughter.

I believe we are supposed to be over this nonsense, at least he's making an effort and doing something he likes, lets see you post a short story Danny.

Danny, i don't wish to sound like I am having a go at you, but such behavior is remarkably childish, give him credit for at least trying, no need to put the guy down for doing something he enjoys.

One where I'm not insulting to the same person over and over again.

It's not best story EVER!

But I give him the credit for trying and his writing seems to be fine.

Could do with some expansion on the monkey man. Its just hello ... goodbye!

Nice to see some creative criticism and credit given to James here, much more mature then others in this instance.

Glad someone here has some sense. My ridiculing of this story has nothing to do with who wrote it. It has to do only with its quality.

I disagree. I am merely expressing my honest opinion of the story. I found it so bad it was laughable. Obviously I'm not alone.

I'd prefer to give him credit for succeeding. Sadly I can't.

Of course not. There does appear to be need to put him down for sharing it here though.

So Rv insults megan and he gets booted but your allowed to insult other people and allow it, how the fuck does that work Danny?

To Jamie & Chris:
Thank you for defending me.
To Danny and Rat:
Do you have like some sort of chronic disease that makes you put down everything I do?

I think the disease they have is brain rot, while not a real disease to my knowledge taken out of context it would explain a lot about them, they seem to have forgotten they are nothing special and putting you down does not make them the best human brings which ever lived, puts them down with the likes of Hitler, who also treated others utterly terribly because they were different.

Yeah.:P

FFS it wasn't an insult. It was just his opinion on the story. To be honest Rat's is far more borderline than Danny's. he just said he and Megan laughed at it where as Rat said "IT'S SHIT" in huge letters. Though even then he didn't directly insult James.
You're being overdefensive of him Chris.

An example of a true insult:
"Your story sucks and you suck for posting it. You are a talentless idiot." - That's an insult.

*applause*

Now this is the kind of person I want on my staff.

Fine, whatever.

Chris, please read my latest PM to you. This thread is being cleaned up right now.

I do think more constructive opinions should be posted in the future though.

As for the topic at hand. James, I regret to say I see where they're coming from. The story was rather... odd. The melodrama was pretty corny and it all just seemed WTFish. It came out in a "So bad it's good" kind of way. Like Snakes on a Plane.
However, you do have potential. I have a feeling as you get older you will certainly improve. Keep at it. I just don't suggest you post anything here. :P

I read Kody, and i say again that seeing Danny post things like "This is who I want on my Staff." is very hard to take, since we agreed I would come back as a Moderator to try and clear things up, and since he is obviously not listening to me, and appointing people who just follow his ideas is making me wonder why i have even bothered. Anyone who logs onto a forum to read that something they posted is getting laugh at over the phone is going to be upset! To them, thats an insult.

Yes I may be sticking up for James a lot, but what Danny and Rat posted was pointless, childish and not even explained as to why they hated it. It's still a form of bullying.

In the interest of being constructive, I shall quote someone who is. :P

Agreed.