"Most dreamiest man ever." Good english there!
(Might want to fix that, eh?)
Nice story though, despite some odd usage of the english language I can truthfully say so far this story's shaping up to be a great wreck.
Interpret that as you will. It's 2am. Shush.
I also like how you (or perhaps I missed it) hid the fact that it had anything to do with Doctor Who and everyone's favorite cyborg mutants and revealed it with one word
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Looks like the Daleks have a train wreck of an invasion going on.