Fantastic! Woah, really?! (you sound like dr 9!) Yeah, i did try to make it not give much away in the first chapter, obviously apart from the ickle first paragraph, unless you know me (really well!) or are just very good at guessing, fingers crossed, no one noticed that it was a doctor who story! hehe, well i tried...

I know, my english is a little rubbish (i even spelt that wrong and had to re-write it 5 times!) i'm only 13, gimme a break!!! And anyways, i'm just a little stupid! ^^