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Old September 25, 2006, 10:13 AM
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Day 2: (11:57 Room)

The Great Escape-
“Where the hell is she…” said Grace impatiently, pacing up and down the room in a frenzy.
“Who…?” asked Claire, lying on her bed staring at the ceiling.
“Gah! Look, I know I haven’t told you yet, but… oh my god, it’s 12:01!” she screamed looking at the clock. “She’s late, we’ll just have to go to B block all by ourselves, right, troops, gather.” Everyone slowly got up and moved into the middle of the room. “Awww, come on, this is a rescue mission, thought cleverly up by me. You should all be happy!” Many people put on a fake smile and followed Grace to the door.


Grace jumped in shock.
“What the hell are you doing here. Quit it, stop being so…” she stopped to think, waving her arm madly. “Bright, yeah, bright!” Everyone had stopped to stare at her.
“Well, sorry, but you weren’t in your room! I can’t help it if SOMEONE goes off on some rescue mission and doesn’t tell me!”
“It’s not my fault,” she whispered menacingly. They were approaching the B block. “If some of us don’t turn up on time!”
“Oh yeah!” Maddy yelled sarcastically. “Five minutes late, that’s not on time!”
“Shhh…” Grace said holding her finger to her lips. “Finger’s on lips!” she said and winked.
“Are you ok Grace?” asked Lucy edging towards her and looking at her like she was having some sort of fit.
“Yeah, I’m just telling… actually, you tell her, she is being stupid isn’t she?!” To the three bewildered girls, it looked like Grace was pointing at thin air.
“Who?” asked Sophie suddenly, stepping forward.
“MADDY! Oh, god, you people are on her side… aren’t you!?”
“Maddy’s dead, you know that, you was there!”
“Yeah, but, no, but yeah, but… well… yeah, but she’s come back to us as a ghost!” she laughed. “Isn’t that right Mad?”
“Ofcourse it is, and I am sorry Grace for being late,” she said hastily.
“Still talking to no one am I?!” Grace said triumphantly.
“Yes!” they all said in unison. Grace shook her head and sidled around the corner. The guards were sitting in the teacher’s room, sipping coffee and watching ‘Extras’. Their laughing echoed around the deep, dark hall, making the girls feel eerie and strange. Grace beckoned to the girls following her and slowly made her way to the office next door. Studying the board, she noticed the initials.
“NB, right, she’s in number 42, you guys stand out here, me and Sophie will go and get ‘er, we’ll be back in a giffy!” she smiled disappearing out of sight.

Grace looked around the dark empty cell. She couldn’t see anything inside, but it was pitch black, so you couldn’t blame her. She quickly jumped down from Sophie’s shoulders and produced a long crowbar from her bag.
“Right,” she said to Sophie. “Stand back.” Sophie stood a few paces back, but didn’t see why. All Grace was going to do was pry open the door, but her eyes opened with realisation as Grace brought her arm back to smash the door. Sophie tried to stop her, reaching out to grab it, but it slipped through her fingers and instead went crashing into the door. They both ran inside and flicked on the torch. The cell was completely empty.
“But… it had her initials. She can’t have got out.” Grace said running her fingers along the door. “This is steel.” She ran over to the wall and brushed her hands along it. As Sophie heard footsteps, she looked out of the door, only to see the two guards running towards them. There was a scream, and as Sophie looked back, she could see the torch on the floor, and that was it.

now, there's a problem with the next paragraph... i sorta did it at school and forgot to send it home! ^^' but i will try and remember tomorrow, i had to sort out a stupid history presentation today and it completely slipped my mind. Although... it is Year Captin voting, speech thing tomorrow and Talie's running, i might forget then, although i might not! ^^ we'll c, i'm crap at remembering stuff!