Yes, this one was far cleaner and better edited than the pilot. Well done.
I have one piece of advice for you though about the subtitles. When they're on a white background (as they were for some of this episode) they're completely unreadable. Use Vegas to add a black drop shadow behind it. That'll make it readable no matter where it is.
Also, of course, I'm glad my music found its way in there and was helpful to your production. (Except of course all that was in this one was recreating of Murray's stuff...) I look forward to providing more for you later on though.
