My original plan was not to include the second half of the melody. Partly because of laziness (although I have done it in my first remix so I can't be
that lazy!) and partly because it's a remix, rather than a recreation. If I feel it will add something significant to the track without making it too much of the same, I might consider adding it.
The lack of timing on the melody was intentional but it might revert to the standard degree timing, depending on how it goes. Chances are, it will anyway.
The deep bass synth is becoming a bit of a problem. It'll take a lot of fiddling to make it noticeable without it just turning it into a big tub of mud.
I've created a new synth for the bridge section and I'm still working around with the synth on the melody. Trying to find whatever sounds best.
I'll post a new version when it's complete (it could be tomorrow, it could be next weekend, or it could be next year (less likely)). Thanks for the comments so far!