Originally Posted by Rat Souffle
It's probably by web host being annoying again. I'm sure they have been randomly turning their servers off to annoy me recently.
I'll just upload it as an attachment here.
Attachment 314
I seem to be having a bit of trouble with the second layer, don't you think?
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To be honest, the problem lies more with your notation than your sound. The notation is laid out more like the Glynn theme than the Howell theme.
Example 1: You have wildly flailing and alternating diddly-dums and dum-de-dums. Only the very first one should be a diddly-dum; all the rest should be dum-de-dums.
Example 2: Your second layer goes Glynn style: F#, E F#, E F#, E A. Should go Howell (and Derbyshire) style: F#, E F#, E F#, G# A.