As I told you on gtalk, Danny, I think it is really brilliant. I love how you've taken all of the best parts (not many
) from the VotD theme and bashed them into something awesome. The percussion works really well, it's a sort of endless pulse that drives the whole thing. Definitely on my iPod.
I agree with RV, it does need its own melody. It needs some jiggly jiggly spacey noises and the main sections need to be brought out a tiny bit, but other than that, it's truly excellent.
Edit: I've added some stuff;
A Voyage Saved With Synthdamentalism.mp3 (Mediafire)