[James P.]

I'm trying to get a script accepted to the Doctor Who Audio Dramas. I've gone through about 4 already. All were rejected as scripts...
Link to the DWADs main webpage:http://www.dwad.net/
Here's what I'll be submitting:

Doctor Who
The Shadow Merger
By James P. Quick

Summary

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Upon Moira’s request, the Doctor pilots the TARDIS to Chicago in the 1920s. Once there they are noticed immediately and everyone around them flees. Perplexed as to why, the two set out to look for answers. They soon are attacked by a group of seemingly insane kids.

The duo wake up in some sort of underground cell. Knocking on the door of the cell, the Doctor convinces the guard to let them out. The guard takes the Doctor to the leader, an alien named Kelvehee, who explains that he is the last of the Hpi (say it like ‘hippie’), a species of alien who lived on a planet stuck in 2 different dimensions. Energy coming from the other dimension, called Odolphea, effected the Hpis’ ancestor’s evolution, granting them god-like powers. Before they could cause any real damage to the rest of the universe, the Hpi accidentally destroyed themselves, excluding Kelvehee.

Kelvehee has been using his powers to wreak havoc on Chicago; unaware his disguise was identical in every way to the Doctor. The most fun ‘game’ to Kelvehee is to merge shadows together, which creates horrible mutants because the owners of the respected shadows merge to fit the shadow. The kids liked his ‘games’ and now submit only to him.

Moira notices that as he talks Kelvehee becomes lighter in color and more sickly looking. Then, when he exhales, his color returns to normal and is no longer sickly looking. As they are taken back to the cell, Moira mentions this to the Doctor saying that might be his weak spot. The guard hears this and wants to join, as he does not like submitting to Kelvehee any longer.

With some more kids joining later, the Doctor and Moira soon have a small group of rebels formed. They storm Kelvehee’s throne room. They quickly are captured and some even taken out of existence permanently! The Doctor and Moira are brought before the last Hpi and he tells the that they will be the latest players in the "Shadow Merging" game…

Episode One: Putting the Roar Back in ‘The Roaring 20’s’
Episode Two: Jailbreak
Episode Three: Extinction of the Hpi
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Well, cross your fingers. I hope it gets accepted.

~JP