Originally Posted by Dalek104
That's great, Danny! I think you've made a nice improvement to the strings (including the violin and cello) and the trombone.
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Thanks!
Originally Posted by Dalek104
However, I think there's a bit too much reverb for my liking. Also, can I have the acoustic guitar back, please? 
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Whoops! I read "Acoustic" and my mind went to "Acoustic Bass" rather than "Acoustic Guitar." This is now fixed. Although I must say, the way you're using the acoustic guitar makes any instrument I use sound very sampled. The same problem was also present in your original. You may want to consider using it a little differently (i.e. changing the notes around) to help with that a little. Also, the reverb has been scaled back as per your request. I think it still needs
some reverb though.
Originally Posted by Dalek104
Other than that, I think you've done a great job with the instruments and the mastering!
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Thanks very much!
Originally Posted by Dalek104
That's a good idea! Maybe an electric guitar would go well from about 2:44.
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Send me an updated MIDI and I'll work it into mine if you like.
Originally Posted by Dalek104
Thanks for the help! 
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You're very welcome!
Here is the new version:
http://www.dannystewart.com/music/dalek104/untitled.mp3