Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
Sorry for not taking the time to review this properly before. The video is actually fairly well done. With continued practice you will likely get even better at this.
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Thanks
Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
hat said, there are a few issues. For one thing, it's too long. It fails to really maintain your attention at its present length. I would consider scaling it back by at least two minutes or so.
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I realized it was a bit lengthy but I wanted to put some action in and keep Lux Aeterna (the calm bit) at the beginning. So this meant it would be lengthy. I also wanted to put the Doctors story in it (Gallifrey etc) but I still didn't have enough time to.
Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
Secondly, the music is very disjointed. It's too loud, for starters, and it also jumps between that horribly overused trailer music (the name escapes me at the moment) and some of Murray's stuff. You should be more consistent, keep the music quieter, and also try and avoid that music you clearly love so much as it's way, way overdone and difficult to take seriously anymore.  |
Music I definitely find hardest especially with iMovie. (SK is right it is the Two Towers version of Requiem For A Dream). Volume is a pain getting it to the right level so sometimes I just make it full. I do love Lux Aeterna though and I like it loud (makes it more dramatic). Thinking of using Globus - Preliator soon.
Annoyed that the River speech music came through a bit too much but it was necessary to hear the dialogue. I sort of like the Doctor Forever poking through when Gallifrey is being described.
They end bit very disjointed but I wanted *pfft* We'll be gone"
Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
I'd say FCE will do very well for what you're looking for.
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I'm looking into it and hopefully will get it.
I've made a S3 Mid series trailer but it needs some redefining so hopefully will sort it out soon.