I do think more constructive opinions should be posted in the future though.
As for the topic at hand. James, I regret to say I see where they're coming from. The story was rather... odd. The melodrama was pretty corny and it all just seemed WTFish. It came out in a "So bad it's good" kind of way. Like Snakes on a Plane.
However, you do have potential. I have a feeling as you get older you will certainly improve. Keep at it. I just don't suggest you post anything
here.
