I think I'm quite satisfied with my first creation so I've uploaded it to YouShare (since they're free). You can listen to it directly from the link
http://www.youshare.com/Zeo/419515a3fc97d95e.mp3.html.
Enjoy (hah!)
My next piece will be a lot better now that Danny has given me a much better template to base my work on. So back to work