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Old May 13, 2010, 11:43 AM
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Couple of quick comments:

- From a mixing perspective, I would turn down the melody and/or turn up the bassline.

The rest of these comments are things that are correct in the MIDI file I gave you, so please feel free to skim/compare them to the MIDI.

- Diddly-dums (four notes) during the first melody phrase, dum-de-dums (three notes) during the second.
- The first note of the bridge should be down a tone (starts on A instead of B).

A few other little niggles, but the littler they are, the harder they become to explain via text. It's all in the MIDI.

All in all, great for a first effort. You'll quickly improve!
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