Dig the TARDIS-like sound effects you're using (presumably for the drones).
You should also experiment a bit more with what octaves you're using. I would move the bassline down an octave for instance, and you might want to play with the melody octaves as well. I did the MIDI based on what sounded best on the piano so you could get a feel for how it would sit within a mix. It wasn't necessarily intended to be used as is, and you'll find that the best octave will vary depending on the instrument.
My remaining advice would be to continue to play with mixing. I'm still of the opinion that your melody is too loud and the baseline needs to be boosted.
Other than that, you're well on your way.
Last edited by Danny Stewart; May 15, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Reason: iPad autocorrect changed "bassline" to "baseline"
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