Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
First of all, the tempo. I just looked into it for you and it should be at 120 bpm.
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Sorted.
Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
First main comment is that you're missing the theme's "second layer" (if you don't know what that is, see here or here). There isn't one during the bridge, but there is one after the bridge (although it's fucking weird—John Debney really didn't get the bassline). |
Yeah that's in but wasn't finished my bad.
Originally Posted by Danny Stewart
Your note timings are also a bit too rigid, like they've been snapped too tightly to a grid. For example in melody 1, during the second half, when the notes fall back down to B they go "daa-daa-daaaa" instead of "daaaaaa-da-daaaa."
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You gonna have to show me what you mean, cos if I understand you right the daa-da-daa bit is correct. I've compared it with the actual debney version and it is 95% the same it terms of note length.
I've uploaded a new version with the correct tempo, tightened the transition from the bridge to the melody, fixed the intro and the second bassline. But I'm afraid the instruments are still rubbish.
