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Oh sweet jesus what the bloody hell is that? The entire thing sounds flanged, negative and ghastly. Please please finish it first, and for God's sake match up the bassline and the melody properly so that it isn't all clunky and messy.
Mind you, you'll probably quit because of that remark because you're a flouncey puss. Don't deny it. I was the same at 14.
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Dost thou expect me, thy monarch, to dine on such meagre portions thus 'ere?!
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