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Old July 24, 2010, 3:23 PM
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Originally Posted by Ben Dawson View Post
I didn't really take to the second melody sound you used (the really tinny one).
Yeah, I completely agree with you on that, I'll try and get a better one that fits the piece.



Originally Posted by Ben Dawson View Post
The timing of the melody also seemed very off, it fitted out of place over the bassline. It sounded like you were racing to punch in out as fast as you could.
Well, that's the trouble with having a MIDI2USB adapter and not a USB midi keyboard. I see if I can make a perfect re-record though.



Originally Posted by Ben Dawson View Post
If you were going for a minimilistic style then it would have worked, but the strings at the beginning suggest a fuller sounding piece, then the strings fall out and it just leaves the theme falling flat afterwards.
Originally Posted by ATV642 View Post
It doesn't have any background instruments until the end but it's not finished yet so what do you expect?


Originally Posted by Ben Dawson View Post
The scream seemed pretty cut off at the beginning.
Blame the fucking trailer maker. I'll look for another one.



Thanks for your help btw.
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