The sound levels sound a lot better now, the different parts sound much more equally placed now (with some sounds, you'll find they're louder than others, so need to be quieter when mixing than the quieter ones, it's all about finding the right balance that doesn't make a certain part sound too bombastic).
Now Danny may differ on this, but my main problem now is just the timing.
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DOC-TOR WHO?!?!
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