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				Spelling and grammar. We frown upon poor spelling and grammar here. Look up words you don't know, and always construct complete, coherent sentences with a capital letter at the start and a period at the end. 
 
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			It's called a typo. Its no big disaster if I spell Darren Brown Derren Brown. Everyone knows who I mean. Stop being so pedantic. COuld someone try and give a shit about the video instead of making it a nag-at-Jamie-Fest
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			Anyway, slightly off topic, but Sontaran related, I got the 'Bred for War' Boxset from HMV today, which has all of the Sontaran stories from the classic series. I watched 'The Time Warrior' this morning and thought it was alright, but not absolutely smashing. I'm going to presume Sontarans are more awesome when there are lots of them, and that 'The Two Doctors' will be good simply because Colin Baker AND Patrick Troughton are in it.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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				Kind of like "tl;dr" except more like "tmc;dc" (too many crossfades; didn't care). 
			
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				BTW Danny, what do you suggest about the crossfades. I can only use different transitions because if I get rid of them the video jumps and freezes and it will all be out of sync. 
			
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				I don't know what the hell you're talking about.  I just tried editing together random scenes from The Sontaran Stratagem in iMovie (both '06 and '08) and I had no problems with "freezing" or "jumping" or anything of that sort.  It just worked, like it's supposed to. 
			
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 I found out what it is. Its something else but complicated. It is my FIRST time of using it after all, not a surprise I got confused.
 
Made a Doomsday one in though with less fading at then end with the crucendo (no idea how you spell that).
 
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				I found out what it is. Its something else but complicated. It is my FIRST time of using it after all, not a surprise I got confused. 
			
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			Well, if you want some constructive criticsim, I'll take a shot at it. 
Work on the transitions, a few of them were rather jarring the way the frames went from one to another. The bubble transition.. thing, near the start was unneeded. Never use anything like that, in my opinion, just clean cuts.
 
The text you added was hard to read due to coloring / size.
 
Music was overpowering in some parts and the entire thing didn't have something "binding" it all together, music and background noise was going up and down, this way and that, all willy nilly.
 
Your also right in that it's not a trailer, more like an episode recap, considering it shows everything. Maybe try making those, over a trailer? Not saying you can't make a trailer, this is just nothing like one.
 
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				Well, if you want some constructive criticsim, I'll take a shot at it. 
Work on the transitions, a few of them were rather jarring the way the frames went from one to another. The bubble transition.. thing, near the start was unneeded. Never use anything like that, in my opinion, just clean cuts.
 
The text you added was hard to read due to coloring / size.
 
Music was overpowering in some parts and the entire thing didn't have something "binding" it all together, music and background noise was going up and down, this way and that, all willy nilly.
 
Your also right in that it's not a trailer, more like an episode recap, considering it shows everything. Maybe try making those, over a trailer? Not saying you can't make a trailer, this is just nothing like one.
 
Overall, work more on making it bind together and have a sort of theme. The volume, background noise / music, colors, fonts used, etc... These all need to mesh together and not jump all over the place.
 
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				Music was overpowering in some parts and the entire thing didn't have something "binding" it all together, music and background noise was going up and down, this way and that, all willy nilly. 
			
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				Your also right in that it's not a trailer, more like an episode recap, considering it shows everything. Maybe try making those, over a trailer? Not saying you can't make a trailer, this is just nothing like one. 
			
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				Overall, work more on making it bind together and have a sort of theme. The volume, background noise / music, colors, fonts used, etc... These all need to mesh together and not jump all over the place. 
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 Instead of making these changes to my current videos I would like to integrate them into new ones. I would like to make a 42 one or the Series 3 finale (inc. Utopia). Might get onto making a Series Summary with Requiem for a dream or Preliator (Lacrymosa remix) for the music (as they are longer). What do you mean by jumping about? Would like to sort that out. I know there is one jumpy bit in the Sontaran "trailer".
 
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